Comments on: Sample Letter When A Bank Rejects You for a Loan http://www.bloggingawaydebt.com/2006/10/sample-letter-when-a-bank-rejects-you-for-a-loan/ Our Journey to a Debt-Free Life Mon, 13 Feb 2012 00:10:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Noemi Carll http://www.bloggingawaydebt.com/2006/10/sample-letter-when-a-bank-rejects-you-for-a-loan/comment-page-1/#comment-1028755 Noemi Carll Sun, 18 Jul 2010 15:41:39 +0000 http://www.bloggingawaydebt.com/2006/10/sample-letter-when-a-bank-rejects-you-for-a-loan/#comment-1028755 good site! good site!

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]]> By: HC http://www.bloggingawaydebt.com/2006/10/sample-letter-when-a-bank-rejects-you-for-a-loan/comment-page-1/#comment-2348 HC Mon, 23 Oct 2006 14:11:07 +0000 http://www.bloggingawaydebt.com/2006/10/sample-letter-when-a-bank-rejects-you-for-a-loan/#comment-2348 The tone in a few of these paragraphs strikes me as a bit aggressive, but it obviously worked for the reader. The fifth paragraph, by moving the conversation out of the binary yes/no realm, is excellent. I might replace "displeasure" with "disappointment." I would also replace "I was of the (apparently mistaken) belief that..." with "I had hoped that..." if I were writing this kind of letter for myself. I wouldn't want to antagonize the loan officer. That said, I'm glad your reader received the loan. I fully agree about the value of credit unions, which is why I'm a member of one. The tone in a few of these paragraphs strikes me as a bit aggressive, but it obviously worked for the reader.

The fifth paragraph, by moving the conversation out of the binary yes/no realm, is excellent.

I might replace “displeasure” with “disappointment.” I would also replace “I was of the (apparently mistaken) belief that…” with “I had hoped that…” if I were writing this kind of letter for myself. I wouldn’t want to antagonize the loan officer.

That said, I’m glad your reader received the loan. I fully agree about the value of credit unions, which is why I’m a member of one.

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